The addition of just a few transitional words in the passage above helps the writerindicate how the different parts of the passage are logically related and strengthensthe "flow" of the sentences.
Three Problems to Avoid
Transitional words and phrases help strengthen writing, but they can be misused.Below are three things to be wary of as you bring transitional words and phrasesinto your essays.
Make sure the logical connections are clear as you use transitions.
Because transitions indicate relationships between words and ideas, they can bemisused if the relationship indicated by the transitional words is unclear or doesnot exist.Example: George's wife stands at the window and looks out at the rain falling onthe empty streets. For example, she sees a cat huddled under a table in the rain.("For example" does not make sense here because the woman seeing the cat isnot a clear "example" of anything in the first sentence.)Example: George's wife decides to go out into the rain to get the cat.Consequently, George sits in bed reading his book. ("Consequently" doesnot make sense here because it is unclear how George sitting in bedreading is a consequence of the woman deciding to get the cat.)
Avoid the overuse of transitions.
Transitions are supposed to guide readers through your writing, but overuse oftransitional words and phrases can have the opposite effect and can make yourwriting confusing.Example: Writing an essay can be challenging. However, there are techniquesthat can make the process a little easier. For example, taking plenty of notes onthe subject can help the writer generate ideas. Therefore, note-taking is animportant "pre-writing" strategy. In addition, some people "free-write," writingquickly for ten or twenty minutes to see what ideas arise. However, taking notesand free-writing are only the beginning. Ideas must eventually be organized in alogical way. Consequently, an outline can help the writer make sense of therough material generated through the note-taking and free-writingprocess. Therefore, writing an outline is another important step in the writingprocess. However, some writers are able to conceptualize a sense of logicalorder for their ideas without actually writing an outline. Nevertheless, thesewriters seem to have some kind of outline in their minds. In addition, an outlineshould help the writer formulate a thesis for the essay. Consequently, an outlinecan help give focus to the essay. (This passage could be stronger with fewertransitional words and phrases. Especially when the transitions are used at thebeginnings of sentences, they can become annoying or even confusing toreaders if they are overused.)
Она сейчас будет. - Она? - Беккер рассмеялся. Он не заметил в АНБ ни одного существа женского пола. - Вас это смущает? - раздался у него за спиной звонкий голос.